

One morning a few weeks ago, I was scrolling through the New York Times headlines on my phone and came across an article titled “The Moon Has a Comet-Like Tail” by Robin George Andrews. With words like “beam” and “magical” in the short preview, it sounded so poetic. In addition to being a fascinating read, I thought it might provide material for a found poem.
Moonbeam
Meteorites bombard our volcanic pearl,
cause sodium atoms to fly…
high.
A mystifying moonbeam
in twilight skies
dusts earth with dandruff,
creates curiosity…
wonder…
magic…
Thanks to Linda who has the Poetry Round Up today at Teacher Dance.
“volcanic pearl”…love it! Well done, Rose…beautiful imagery within the words you found.
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Thanks, Matt. I love found poetry.
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Lovely images in your poem. Also love “volcanic pearl.” Well done!
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Dandruff – what an unexpected word, and yet how unexpectedly perfect! Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
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Yes, it was an unexpected word to find. But since it was in the article, I used it, too.
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It’s like you now have two poems, the article & your own, Rose. I love moon poems, stories, art, a ‘favorite thing’! Love this start: “cause sodium atoms to fly… high.” That word ‘high’ is a lovely punctuation mark!
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Thanks, Linda. Found poems are fun. I can take credit for the arrangement, but the actual words are “borrowed”. And the moon is always such an inspiration.
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Love it! I write often about the moon, but writing something that’s not cliched (or that hasn’t already been said) is tricky. Your “volcanic pearl” is fresh and new!
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Thank you Mary Lee. I’m getting lots of comments about that phrase, but I hope everyone understands that my poem is a found poem from the NYT article, so the words are not original (as much as I wish they were).
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Love your poem, Rose. Your line about how “a mystifying moonbeam…dusts earth with dandruff” is brilliant! And I learned something new about the moon. 🙂
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Thanks, and thanks to the author of the article whose words I borrowed.
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Thanks for your celestial moonbeam-beauty poem Rose, that flows with cosmic excitement through each line.
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I love non-fiction poetry and writing from news stories. Love the sound of, “A mystifying moonbeam in twilight skies.”
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A magical poem!
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Love volcanic pearl and dandruff and the surprise of this moonbeam poem.
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