
It’s Poetry Friday!
Back in the day when I shared writing lessons with students and teachers, I often used “That Was Summer” by Marci Ridlon as a mentor text. Here’s the first verse:
Have you ever smelled summer?
Sure you have. Remember that time
when you were tired of running
or doing nothing much
and you were hot
and you flopped right down on the ground?
Remember how the warm soil smelled—
and the grass?
That was summer.
This week my poetry group was charged with exploring a sense, and Marci Ridlon’s poem immediately came to mind. I wanted to explore the sense of smell since so many of my memories, especially childhood memories, are linked to smells. “That Was Summer” was my jumping off point for my poem…

Can You Smell the Sun?
The smell of spring starts with the sun
encouraging each peony petal to open,
each honeysuckle bloom to burst.
It starts with the sun
rising over a salty sea
or a meadow of milkweed.
The smell of summer starts with the sun, too.
On a bed freshly made with line-dried sheets
or lotion-lathered limbs of kids diving in.
It starts with the sun
on sizzling sidewalks
and homespun fun.
Take a deep breath.
Can you smell the sun?
Draft, 2023Rose Cappelli
Patricia has the round up today at Reverie where she is celebrating a special anniversary. Be sure to stop by for a special tribute to love and commitment and lots more poetry fun! Happy anniversary, my friend.