
Happy Poetry Friday!
One morning this week I opened Almost an Elegy by Linda Pastan hoping to find some inspiration for a poem. And boy, did she deliver. I read four poems and instantly had at least three ideas. My poem for today was inspired by Pastan’s poem “Squint,.” I was drawn to how she used the title followed by a comma to begin the poem. I couldn’t find a link to it online, but this is how it begins:
SQUINT,
and that low line
of blue cloud
hovering
over the treetops
could be an ocean—the roar
of the highway
the clamorous waves
breaking.
Although I chose to repeat the structure to begin each stanza, my poem was definitely inspired by and written in the style of Linda Pastan.
Pause,
and you might notice
the daffodil reaching through
the too-soon-soft soil
on a warm winter afternoon.
Pause,
and you might hear
the distant drumming
of a woodpecker
messaging a mate.
Pause,
and you might feel
the quiet
in a cup of tea
sipped from a china cup.
Draft, 2023RoseCappelli

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Molly has the Round Up today at Nix the Comfort Zone where you’ll find her beautiful tribute to winter trees and lots more poetry fun.

