Different Perspectives

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I am participating in the March Slice of Life Story Challenge. Thanks to the co-authors of              Two Writing Teachers for creating this  supportive community.

I was back walking Cyrus on the trail yesterday for the first time in a long time. It felt good to be back and I let my mind wander to noticing and wondering. As I thought, I wondered what Cyrus might be thinking (his thoughts in italics).

 

I wonder how far I will be able to walk today.

                                                                                                 On the trail again. Let’s go!

I wonder how the land being taken for the new housing development will affect the deer we sometimes see.

                                                         What’s that noise in the distance? What’s happening?

I wonder if we’ll finish our walk before it starts to rain.

                                                                                                       Smells like rain! Love it!

I wonder how Rina and Paul will react when they realize Caroline found their baby (from an audio book I’m currently “reading”).

                                                  What’s this new smell here? I need more time on this spot.

I wonder when we will start to see new growth on the trees.

                                                      New clump of green. Grass starting to grow.  I’ll water it.

 

Thank you to everyone at TWT for all of your hard work in organizing and sustaining this event, and thank you to everyone who read and commented on my posts. This is my fourth year of participation. In previous years I prepared for this event by rereading old notebooks, thinking of different structures, and sketching out a few posts. But this year was different. I jumped in with no plans, so I decided to really let myself notice the small things that happen daily – true slices of life. For the most part, I think I accomplished that goal, and I am proud that I managed to post every day while I was on vacation, keeping the momentum (my OLW) going.

Thank you all for being a part of this wonderful community of writers. See you on Tuesdays!

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8 Responses to Different Perspectives

  1. Teasers in the comments, not just the title, are key. You had me at “trail,” one of my most favorite words! I love Cyrus’ dialogue — all that really matters. I hope you don’t see much impact from the future development, but I’m sure you will. When I was little that apple orchard behind my house filled with rabbit warrens was leveled for houses. Your slice brought those memories back. Powerful. See you Tuesday!

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  2. Suzanne's avatar Suzanne says:

    Wonderful slice, reflecting on so many trails! And you are reading, Lilac Girls!!! Such a great trail to meander.

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  3. dianeandlynne's avatar dianeandlynne says:

    Cyrus thinks deeply about what matters to him. 😉
    I, too, was impressed that you managed to slice every day of your vacation! Hoping out trails converge on Tuesdays throughout the year.

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  4. Love that you not only shared your wondering, but Cyrus’ too! Glad you got back on the trail! I didn’t plan much for this year’s challenge either. Was great to really notice the world around me!

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  5. Clare Landrigan's avatar Clare Landrigan says:

    You sure did – and I loved coming on vacation with you. Can’t wait to celebrate in person next week! Safe travels !
    Clare

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  6. arjeha's avatar arjeha says:

    Love hearing Cyrus’s thoughts. Although planning is nice sometimes seeing where out thought takes can be both daring and interesting. Thanks for your comments on my posts, Rose. Looking forward to your Tuesday posts.

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